hamzi
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Posted on:17th Jul 2008, 4:25pm |
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uet yar main nay tumhare name se topic shoro kia hai chating main reply karo |
Samir
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Posted on:17th Jul 2008, 4:25pm |
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Yar Abhi Ahmed Faraz Zinda Hain Abii Ahmed Faraz Zinda Hain
But He need Our Prayers, May Allah Bless him the Good Health
http://jang.com.pk/jang/jul2008-daily/17-07-2008/update.htm#57
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pinky7861
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Posted on:17th Jul 2008, 5:49pm |
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Hamzi suno!suno! kuch aisa karo chand se thori see mitti lay aao iss k do bott banao aik kuch kuch tum jaisa aik kuch kuch mujh jaisa
phir kuch aisa karo k inn botto ko torr do phir say mitti gondh lo phir inn k do bott banao tum may kuch kuch mein reh jaoun mujh may kuch kuch tum reh jao
.......Continued from this orginal poem, in which poet wants her mahbob to go to ALL THE WAY to moon just to bring lil bit of MITTI, hahahhaaaaa...... I have fixed the problem by suggesting the ''CHORI FROM A NEIBHOUR"S YARD" so u dont have to go to the moon for this nonsense FERMAISH...hehehe lolzzzz
suno! iss saray dramay kay liay,
chand pay tum kioun jatay ho,
Itni lambi batain choro,
hamsaaioun kay gher tum jau,
thori si mitti churau,
chotay chotay bott banau,
aur phir kerlo wo saray chonchlay,
jo tum kernay walay thya!
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Does it make sense now? |
uetian31
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Group: Members Joined: 18th Mar, 2008 Topic: 20 Post: 1006 Age:
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Posted on:17th Jul 2008, 6:10pm |
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@pinky mohterma evrything in this world is nonsence untill it relates to you, eithr it is an emotion, an incidnet, or any othr thing, if you know the meaning of poetry thn its easy to understand tht it is all about things which mostly donn't exists, emaginations are a part of poetry, which for some one does nto make sence but for othrs it does, so u can just say k this is nonsence for me..but the person who wrote tht thing it might be a pice of literature which he feels like a child! hope u understand |
pinky7861
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Posted on:17th Jul 2008, 10:02pm |
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UET why are u getting so upset for nothing? I assume that members of this site are older enough to understand without my writing it that this stuff is nonsense to ME ONLY and I have no intention of forcing them to take it as nonsense. I have never intended to hurt u or someone else. I like to do this and plz dont take it seriously.
thanks and hope u understand what I mean here. U are alone and express yr self in a sad way, I am alone too but I can't see the glass half empty. |
uetian31
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Group: Members Joined: 18th Mar, 2008 Topic: 20 Post: 1006 Age:
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Posted on:17th Jul 2008, 10:06pm |
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pinky7861 Mohterma actually iam upset coz u always make fun of potery...its not a big thing but...i feel like k u r making fun of thoz who post here...as if it is just a fun...khr..if u wna start new thread about funny poetry...i will welcome that, atleast i would know k us main funny potery or perodies post kerni hain..and iam not sad or alone...its just this i like poetry alot..bs... |
Veer
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Posted on:17th Jul 2008, 10:10pm |
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dear members Note: yeh thread Poetry ke liye hai lehaza all members se request hai topic divert na kare.warna thread ko chatting ki Category mein change kar diya jaye ga. |
Maryam
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 9:45am |
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kissi ko apna bana k dekho agar baharon ne mujh se poocha ,chamakte taaron ne mujh se poocha
batao husne jahan kahan hae, to unhen main barmala kahoonga
tumhen woh meri nazar se dekhain
jo dasht main hae ghatta ki surat , chamman ki surat saba ki surat
magar batao gay tum yeh jaanan
k chain kis ne tumhara loota, yaqeen kaise tumhara toota
jo hosake to kissi ki khatir , nayya jahan tum bassa hi dalo
kissi ko apna bana k dekho
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Veer
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Group: Members Joined: 12th Oct, 2011 Topic: 85 Post: 4723 Age:
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 9:53am |
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Ranj hai, ghum hai Ranj hai, Ghum hai
Dukhoo se be dhaal
Mera ang hai
Dil mein dard
Aankh num hai
Es Rang Bharangi duniya mein
Veer be rang hai. ......
(Written Veer) |
hamzi
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 1:53pm |
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yar i guess uet is very rite bcs its not the thread where we disgrace our poets so kindly pinky made another theread where others who hav the same passion can even do better |
hamzi
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Group: Members Joined: 24th Mar, 2008 Topic: 11 Post: 1070 Age:
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 1:54pm |
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maryam nice job sis |
hamzi
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Group: Members Joined: 24th Mar, 2008 Topic: 11 Post: 1070 Age:
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 2:18pm |
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good one Tumhay Daikha Nahi ,, Jana Nahi,, Phir Bhi Lagta Hy,, Qabeela Aik Hy Apna......
Wohi Dard-E-Judai Hy,, Wohi Bheegi Hoi Palkain,, Naseeba Aik Hy Apna......
Kisi Sy Kuch Nahi Kahna,, Koi Shikwaa Nahi Krna,, Qareena Aik Hy Apna......
Kisi Ki Yaad Sy,, Wirana-e-Dil Jagmaga Lena,, Khazeena Aik Hy Apna......
Yaqeen Ki Aakhri Hud Tak Milan Ki Khushgumani Hy Nateeja Aik Hy Apna...... |
hamzi
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Group: Members Joined: 24th Mar, 2008 Topic: 11 Post: 1070 Age:
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 2:29pm |
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my hav halki halki roshini ho saya fagan.. surkh malboos main saji ho ik dulhan.. churioun ki khankhanat main sharm-o-haya ka pygam. dil ki awaz hai kay inayat ho masti bhara jam.. dhemay dhemay say aftab ka kareeb jana.. reshmi bistar par mehtab ka bal khana.. nazuki aisi kay tarash-e-phool koi... dar hai kay na hoo jay kharash-e-bhool koi.. sard mahool main dhemay say kabhi pyar ki baat. sansoo ki hiddat main guzar rahi hoo raat.. kurbat ka shumar, kay uth na rahii hun palkain.. dard muhabat say ansoon bhi chalkain.. hai dil main wohi khyal-e-raat. .mil jain hum na ho koi baat. .ho dil main ik sada ik dua.. ther jain yeh lamhay ruk jay waqt zara |
hamzi
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Group: Members Joined: 24th Mar, 2008 Topic: 11 Post: 1070 Age:
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 2:30pm |
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usay kehna USE KEHNA !
tumhare hijar ka be-dard mousam mere aangan men dukh phaila raha hai mere hoonton pe chup si lag gae hai mujhe tanhaai dasne lag gae hai
USE KEHNA !
tere jaane ka mousam aankh men tehra huwa hai badan ek khoof men lipta huwa hai tumhara hijar had se barh chuka hai meri saanseen ukhaDti jaa rahi heN men thak kar tootne waala hoN men tum se raabta na tooD baithoN kahen men hoosla na chooD baithoN
USE KEHNA !
KABHI MILNE CHALA AYE...!!! |
hamzi
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Group: Members Joined: 24th Mar, 2008 Topic: 11 Post: 1070 Age:
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 2:31pm |
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fav Mhbt Ka Ab Irada Badl Jana Bhi Mushkil He Tmhein Khona Bhi mushkil He Tmhein Pana bhi Mushkil He
Udasi Tere Chehre Ki Gawara Bhi Nahi lekin Teri Khatir Sitaray Tor Kr Lana Bhi Mushkil He
Zara C Baat Pe Ankhein Bhigo K Beth Jatay Ho Tmhein To Apne Dil Ka Hal Btana bHi mushkil he |
pinky7861
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 8:35pm |
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hamzi I am not here trying to DISGRACE our poets. U are talking according to the old custom where perodies were thought to be a disgrace to the person and to his original work. However, things have changed alot, and now it is considered good to have perodies of one's work. I am not trying to hurt anyone here, and since it is not yr or UEt's orginal work, u need not to worry about it. thanks |
pinky7861
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Posted on:20th Jul 2008, 8:38pm |
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The Daffodils
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I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the Milky Way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced, but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A Poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed--and gazed--but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:
For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils. | |
pinky7861
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Posted on:21st Jul 2008, 12:14am |
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The Road Not Taken!
TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood, |
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And sorry I could not travel both |
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And be one traveler, long I stood |
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And looked down one as far as I could |
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To where it bent in the undergrowth; |
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Then took the other, as just as fair, |
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And having perhaps the better claim, |
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Because it was grassy and wanted wear; |
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Though as for that the passing there |
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Had worn them really about the same, |
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And both that morning equally lay |
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In leaves no step had trodden black. |
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Oh, I kept the first for another day! |
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Yet knowing how way leads on to way, |
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I doubted if I should ever come back. |
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I shall be telling this with a sigh |
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Somewhere ages and ages hence: |
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Two roads diverged in a wood, and I— |
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I took the one less traveled by, |
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And that has made all the difference.
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pinky7861
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Posted on:21st Jul 2008, 12:16am |
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Mending Wall
SOMETHING there is that doesn’t love a wall, |
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That sends the frozen-ground-swell under it, |
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And spills the upper boulders in the sun; |
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And makes gaps even two can pass abreast. |
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The work of hunters is another thing: |
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I have come after them and made repair |
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Where they have left not one stone on a stone, |
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But they would have the rabbit out of hiding, |
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To please the yelping dogs. The gaps I mean, |
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No one has seen them made or heard them made, |
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But at spring mending-time we find them there. |
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I let my neighbour know beyond the hill; |
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And on a day we meet to walk the line |
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And set the wall between us once again. |
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We keep the wall between us as we go. |
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To each the boulders that have fallen to each. |
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And some are loaves and some so nearly balls |
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We have to use a spell to make them balance: |
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“Stay where you are until our backs are turned!” |
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We wear our fingers rough with handling them. |
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Oh, just another kind of out-door game, |
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One on a side. It comes to little more: |
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There where it is we do not need the wall: |
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He is all pine and I am apple orchard. |
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My apple trees will never get across |
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And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him. |
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He only says, “Good fences make good neighbours.” |
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Spring is the mischief in me, and I wonder |
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If I could put a notion in his head: |
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“Why do they make good neighbours? Isn’t it |
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Where there are cows? But here there are no cows. |
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Before I built a wall I’d ask to know |
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What I was walling in or walling out, |
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And to whom I was like to give offence. |
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Something there is that doesn’t love a wall, |
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That wants it down.” I could say “Elves” to him, |
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But it’s not elves exactly, and I’d rather |
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He said it for himself. I see him there |
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Bringing a stone grasped firmly by the top |
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In each hand, like an old-stone savage armed. |
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He moves in darkness as it seems to me, |
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Not of woods only and the shade of trees. |
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He will not go behind his father’s saying, |
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And he likes having thought of it so well |
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He says again, “Good fences make good neighbours.” | | | | | | | | | |
uetian31
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Posted on:21st Jul 2008, 3:29pm |
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Lakeerain Jhoot Boltin Hain Jab Woh Mara Naam,
Apnay Haath Ki Lakeeron Main,
Talash Kar Ky Thak Gai Tuo,
Dheray Sy Sir Ko Jhukaya, Or
Muskara ky Kaha,
Lakeerain Jhoot Boltin Hain |
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