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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:28am |
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 I Need Complete Ghazal
kya kisi ke pas is ki mukamal ghazal hai?? jiske shair kuch yoon hain us se bichde hue to gaya ik zamana guzar par is bat se takleef mujhe hoti hai kar gayi thi jiske lye Tarak-e-taluq mujhse ab paa liya use to mere lye roti hai.. kya kisi ne kabhi ye shair suna..ya iski complete ghazal hai???
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BeautyStar
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Group: Members Joined: 16th May, 2007 Topic: 52 Post: 3586 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:02am |
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 Realistic Poetry
Buhat hi zabardast shair hai jee.. magar afsoos pori ghazal nahi likhey app ne... Buhat hi Realistic Ghazal hogee.. I think...!
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kim84
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Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:05am |
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Dublicate... My is ki dublicate bana sakta hoon.......mgar Original kaha hi maloom nhi....
Agr poet ka name mil jaye tu fir asan ho ga... |
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:06am |
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Kim uncle Buhat hi zabardast shair hai jee...kia ye mere liye likha hai....ooohhhhh thank you so much.
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:08am |
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 lol Sunehri ghalti ho gayi..
Ye Sunehri ko kehna tha......... Buhat hi zabardast shair hai jee...kia ye mere liye likha hai....ooohhhhh thank you so much.
Kim Uncle:
ke liye ye likhana tha aap shair ko gharab ker ke na likha ye aise he acha hai lol
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:10am |
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Chlli ab lagta hai Chillis ko ainak bhi pehan.ni padegin....kitne funny lage gi na chilli ainak ke sath..heheheh
Kim chalo ap karain iski shairy complete....aur mujhe writer ka pata hota to kya bat thi....
beauty...pasand karne ka shukriya...
ab mujhe jana hai..4-5 houers bad aungi...bye for now |
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kim84
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Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:11am |
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Red Chilli Aunty... Aunty my ap sy sirf 3 saal bara hoon.......wesy acha laga.........meri abhi kuch din phly bhanji peda howi hi....wo bhi mjy uncle boalyy gee.....start tu ap ny hee liya....hehehehe |
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:15am |
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 Sunehri
main abhi so ker uthi hoon isliye ghalt likh diya hai main ne pehle kim ke liye baat likhni thi isliye us ka naam likh diya ..lekin phir mujhe yaad nahi raha ke aur main ne aap ke liye neeche likh diya hai....
Kim Uncle: bohat bohat mubarik ho banjee ki ...chalein meri aik choti si cousin aa gayi hai aab ham dono aap ko uncle he kahein gi..lol
mere uncle kehne se aap mere sach much ke uncle nahi ban jao ge...
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kim84
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Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:17am |
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Uncle boly tu Mamooo... Sach my bhi uncle ban jayee to kiya problem hi.................boly tu apun ko Mammooo acha lagta hi.......
Rgds |
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:17am |
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 Sunehri jee very bad
aap ne meri baat ka jawab nahi diya kia ye shair aap en mere liye anhi likha hai...?
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 10:20am |
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Mamooo to jo log chalak hote hain un ko kehte hai boly tu apun ko Mammooo acha lagta hi.......
jo aise bolte hain ....us ne mere ko mammooo banaya..
apun us ko chhore ga nahi..etc etc is tarah ki zuban mammoo bolte hain..
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Bewaqoof
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Group: Members Joined: 19th Sep, 2010 Topic: 263 Post: 4444 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 3:07pm |
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shair ka naam batai sunehri: aap shair ka naam batai tu shayed mai ghazal ko mukammal ker sakoo.
filhal yeh ghazal read kare:
Teri Tasweer meri Ankhon main Basee kyun hai,
Jidhar dekho bus udhar tu hi kyun hai,
Teri yadoon say wabasta meri takdeer hai lekin,
Tujhe naa paa ker meri takdeer roothi kyun hai,
Mujh ko hai khaber asaan nahin tujhe haasil karna,
phir bhi yeh intizaar yeh bekarari kyun hai,
Barson guzar gaye meray tanhayee main lekin,
Meri baanhon ko aaj bhi tera intizaar kyun hai,
Teri chahat ki kasam khoon kay aansoon royaa hon,
Ab nahin hai kuch bakee phir yeh jaan bakee kyun hai..
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 4:40pm |
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Red Chilli jee jee ye apke lye hi likha hai Chilli Madam... ap khush haina???
Kim
Dear & my Fav Brother Mamoo ban.ne ki bohat bohat Mubarik ho apko??? apki kaunsi sis ki beti hui hai,wo jiska ap keh rahe the ke wo meri tarah thodi sidhi si hai??? anyways name kya rakha hai?? mujhe girls babys bohhaaat zyada pasand hain,aise khushi hoti hai jaise meri hui ho,..hehehee
Bewakooff
sorry mujhe kuch bhi nahi yadd.ye shair ek arse se meri dairy me meri fav shairs me mehfooz hai...mere pas ye puri ghazal hua karti thi,par pata nahi kahan miss ho gayi hai...ab iska ye hissa reh gaya hai mere pas...jise maine bohat sambhal ke rakha hua hai..apko acha nahi laga??
apki Ghazaaal kya kya kehna...amazingggggg....
Dil ko lagi ja kar...specially ye shair
Mujh ko hai khaber asaan nahin tujhe haasil karna,
phir bhi yeh intizaar yeh bekarari kyun hai,
Barson guzar gaye meray tanhayee main lekin,
Meri baanhon ko aaj bhi tera intizaar kyun hai,
agar apki ijazat ho to mai apni dairy ke lye note karlun..??
samajh nahi ati apki..kabhi kehte hain shairy se lagao nahi,aur kabhi shair aisa likh dete hain jo bassssss..........kya kahun?? |
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:15pm |
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Sunehri thanks itnee meentein karwane ke baad haan ki hai aap ne....jab main ne pehli baar kaha tha us waqt haan keh deti to acha hota...lol
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:17pm |
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chilli mai chali gayi thi us replay ke bad islye maine apka replay bad me parha hai.... khair ab keh diya haina...apko to khush hona chahye ke maine apke lye shair kaha...hehehe |
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:20pm |
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isliye to main kush hoon mere liye koi shair jo nahi likhta...aap ne likh diya hai thanks...aab main sakoon se soun gi....kia khoob shair ghazal likhi hai aap ne....
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:21pm |
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wo bhi adhiiiii puri likhti to aur bhi acha hota........lol
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:24pm |
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hehehe Chilli, ab mujhe thodi se company do..foran na bhag jana....aur shukar hai apko shair pasand to aye...mujhe to Bewakoof ki Ghazal bohat pasand ayi... |
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Red Chilli
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:28pm |
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Bewaqoof bro ki ghazal mujhe bhi achi lagi hai...wese bhi mujhe sad sad ghazlein he achi lagti hain dil ko chhuo jane wali....
main to 20 mins baad chali jaoun gi..kyun ke kal mujhe daddi aami ke saath hospital jana hai..phir apni aunty ke saath shopping ke liye jaoun gi..aaj kal main bohat pareshaan hoon forum per aane ke liye ziyada time nahi mil raha her waqt kaam kaam aur kaam kerti rehti hoon yaa soti rehti hoon..main ne to bohaaat sare topic read he anhi kiye...
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:22nd Apr 2008, 9:31pm |
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Chilli jee mujhe bhi sad poetry bohat zyada pasand hai...lekin suna hai sad peotry zyada tar wahi pasand karte hain,jinhe pyar na mila ho..ya dhoka khaya ho...
Bewakoof ko to mai bad me puchungi..is choice ki kya wajah hai..
ap apna bataen..aur ap pareshaan kyun hain??kya koi problem hai?? apki dadi aami ki wajah se?? ya koi aur bat hai?? |
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