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kim84
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Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:6th Mar 2008, 1:10pm |
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 Story Of Imagination: Lets Participate In The Story Writing
ohh nhi nhi...yee Atif Aslam ka new album nhi hi..yee to bus ik kahani hi jo my start kronga aur her member us ko agy continue kry ga..dekhty hi end kesy hota hi...so lets start.... " Ik dafa ik village my aik ghareeb kisan tha,Us k ghar koi ulad na thi achanak Allah ny us ko ik pyari beti sy nawaza...wo kafi khush tha magar....." NOTE: Her member last member ki story ko agr barhayay ga...is story ka END my khud kronga after several replies..."
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~~HITMAN~~
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Group: Members Joined: 09th May, 2011 Topic: 122 Post: 4259 Age:
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| Posted on:6th Mar 2008, 1:34pm |
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 Magar.....................
magar wo saath main udaas bhi tha kyunkay uski beti k mathay par ek siyah rung ka daagh tha , jo kay uski beti k chehray par kisi chaad par girhan lagnay jesa maloom hota tha .......... aur is wajah say uski beti ka chahra kafi badnuma hogaya tha ............"
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kim84
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Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:6th Mar 2008, 1:47pm |
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Phir ik din.. wo school my dakhil howi..sb class mates us ko tang krty thy...us k sath koi dosti nhi krta tha.....waqat guzarta gaya aur wo jawan howi..... |
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:6th Mar 2008, 2:02pm |
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jab jab wo jawan hui to uska koi dost nahi tha..use badi khwaish thi ke use ek to dost mil jata jis se wo apni Dil ki bat share kar leti....wo khud ko sheeshe me dekhti to yehi sochti ke usme kya kami hai kyun us se koi dosti nahi karna chahta hai..?kya sab ki nazar me uske Dagh ki itni Ehmiyat thi... |
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iaamir411
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Group: Members Joined: 29th Feb, 2008 Topic: 4 Post: 74 Age:
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| Posted on:6th Mar 2008, 4:30pm |
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phir achanak ik din wo school se college chali gai wahan us ki mulakat ek larke se hui.us larke ka baap ak doctor tha .wo larka us larki ko apne baap ke paas le gia or us doctor ne us ke dagh ka kisi tareeqa se ilaag kr dia or wo bilkul badal gai or bohat haseen ho gai...... |
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Rizwan++
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Group: Members Joined: 15th Nov, 2007 Topic: 12 Post: 243 Age:
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| Posted on:6th Mar 2008, 9:47pm |
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aur phir... aur phir us ki mother ne us ko jaga diya aur kaha ke tumhain college se der ho rehi hai. us ne aine main dekha to wo dagh mojood tha. wo uddaas ho gai aur bedili se college ki taraf paidal chal pari. abhi wo aadhe raste main thi ke use aik burha shakhs mila jis ki darhi buhat ghani thi. us ne larki se kaha ke... |
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iaamir411
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Group: Members Joined: 29th Feb, 2008 Topic: 4 Post: 74 Age:
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| Posted on:7th Mar 2008, 2:24am |
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 khawab such ho gia
ae larki mughey pata ha k tum kion pareshan ho .man abhi tumhari pareshani door karta hon or phir us ne mon per phoonk maari or woh such much khoobssorat ho gai.us ka dagh khatam ho gia or yeh koi khawab nahi tha.wo larki khushi se pagal ho gai. jb wo college gai to sb use dekh kr heran ho gae............. |
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zeb
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Group: Members Joined: 18th Aug, 2007 Topic: 114 Post: 13607 Age:
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| Posted on:7th Mar 2008, 6:37am |
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kahani sub larkian jo us se bat kerney se bhi katraati thin....wo us ko dekh rahi thin aur apas mein baten ker rhi thin k dekho...ye kitni haseen hai...aur sub larkay bhi usey mur mur ker dekh rahey they...jo larkay us ko dekh ker mun pher letey they wo ab us k agay peechay ghoomtay they aur us se dosti kerney ko bechain they... |
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Rizwan++
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Group: Members Joined: 15th Nov, 2007 Topic: 12 Post: 243 Age:
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| Posted on:7th Mar 2008, 10:05pm |
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kahani ka new mor aik din wo larki college ja rahi thi ke us ko wo burha dobara mila. us burhe ne larki se kaha ke tumhain mujh se shaadi karna pare gi warna main aisa manter phoonkon ga ke tumhare chehre par aik ki bajai 100 daagh lag jain gai. larki yeh sun kar ghabra gai. us burhe ki shakal buhat khofnak thi aur us ko dekh kar laki ko apne marhoom dada jaan yaad aa jate the. burhe shaks ne larki se kaha ke main 40 din ka chilla kaatne ja raha hon. jab main wapis aaon ga to hamari shadi ho jai gi ya tumhari qismat ki barbaadi ho jai gi. achi tarah soch lo. mujh se shaadi karo gi ya badsoorat hona pasand karo gi. yeh keh kar burha ghaib ho gaya. |
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Sooth
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Group: Members Joined: 18th Jul, 2007 Topic: 303 Post: 1937 Age:
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| Posted on:7th Mar 2008, 11:26pm |
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then uss ne face surgery kera li to remove that black spot. |
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:8th Mar 2008, 10:37am |
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lekin lekin na jane kyun wo phir bhi moetmin nahi thi...use ek anjana sa khauf tha...use us burhe baba ki batain yad ane lagin lekin usne jaldi se apne zehan se jhatak diya aur apni nayi zindagi ke bare me sochne lagi... |
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iaamir411
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Group: Members Joined: 29th Feb, 2008 Topic: 4 Post: 74 Age:
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| Posted on:8th Mar 2008, 1:17pm |
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 phir us ne ek din
noorclinic ke forum per apna masla bian kia.yahan se use sb ne yahi mashwra dia ke........... |
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kim84
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Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:8th Mar 2008, 3:14pm |
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END OF STORY sb ny yahi mashwara diya k jo tumhy pasand kry ga wo tumhary cheray ko nhi dil ko dekh kr tumy pasand kry ga...tum dil ki saaf niyat ki saaf hogi tu tumhy koi bhi pasand kr ly ga....wo bhut khush howi aur intezar krny lagi 40 din pory hony ka....40 din baad ik nojawan aya aur usy shadi krny k liyeee propose kiya ...larki dil ki saaf thi...BABA ny us k mathay ka dagh ghaaib kiya tha lihaza us ny bola my BABA sy hi shadi krongi.....Nojawan khush howa aur us ko bola k my wohi BABA hoon...40 din ka chilla my ny jawann hony k liyee kata tha...
Dono ny shadi kr liii aur hansi khushi ....rehnay lagy.....
THE END....
MORAL OF THE STORY: NIYAT SAAF MANZIL ASAN.... |
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Red Chilli
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Group: Members Joined: 20th Feb, 2008 Topic: 5 Post: 4962 Age:
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| Posted on:8th Mar 2008, 4:14pm |
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 is ka end kyun ho gaya hai?
abhi to main ne bhi yaha kuch likhna tha. abhi main post kerne lagi thi..lekin kahani ka end dekh ker mera dil toot gaya hai. itni mushkil se itni achi kahani likhi thi.
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zeb
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Group: Members Joined: 18th Aug, 2007 Topic: 114 Post: 13607 Age:
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| Posted on:10th Mar 2008, 6:42am |
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Story # 2.. wahhhhhhhhh bhaiiiii
kitney mazey ki story bana dali hum sub ne mil ker..... :-)
chalo ab koi aur story start kertey hain...isi thread per...
chalo main start kerta hun.....
STORY NO. 2:
ek larki thi...jo bohat hi khoobsurat thi...bohat hiz iada haseen....wo ek achay aur shareef gharanay se talauk rakhthi thi aur us k father businessman they....Allah ka diya sub kuch tha us k pas....wo behen bhaiyon mein sub se bari thi, us k 2 bhai they aur 1 behen or thi.....wo co-education mein 10th class mein perhti thi aur bohat hi ziada intelligent aur laik larki thi.... |
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kim84
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Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:10th Mar 2008, 3:55pm |
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Continue... Us ki class my ik larka tha uska naam KIM tha...aur us khobsurat larki ka naam JILL tha....JILL class my bari laik aur intelligent larki thi....jb KIM nikama tha..wo dil hi dil my JILL sy pyar krta tha....
JILL ki saheliyan usko kbi kbi batati thi k KIM tum ko chahta hi....jb kbhi KIM ...JILL ko dekha krta tha tb achanak jb unki nazerien takrati thi tu JILL ko bhi yaqeen hony lagta tha...mgar na tu KIM himat krta k us ko bolta aur na JILL ...phir EXAMS sir py agyeee....
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@ ZEB..........Bhai yee tumhari khanai hi aur as per rule tum hi END krna..OK |
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sunehri76
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Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 100 Post: 4647 Age:
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| Posted on:10th Mar 2008, 9:19pm |
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okk exams ki tayariyon me kim bas Jill ko hi dekhta rehta,uska parhayi ki taraf dhayan kam hi tha,lekin use fail nahi hona tha..warna wo Jill se ek class piche reh jayega,..to jill ko dekh nahi payega.bas yehi soch kar kim ne bhi apni parhayi shuru kardi.take kam se kam fail na ho jaye... |
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iaamir411
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Group: Members Joined: 29th Feb, 2008 Topic: 4 Post: 74 Age:
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| Posted on:11th Mar 2008, 2:37am |
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 kim
kim men ik kharabi or thi wo ik budsoorat larka tha.or us ki ik ankh bhi nahi thi.jill isi lie us ko reham ki nazron se dekhti thi jise kim samjhta tha ke shaiad jill bhi us se lagao rakhti ha. |
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josh
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Group: Members Joined: 30th Jul, 2007 Topic: 47 Post: 2285 Age:
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| Posted on:11th Mar 2008, 7:12am |
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Story Kim & Jill...... Comments:
haha very very amazing turning point of the story.
kamal kar dia iaamir411...
continue story....
khair na chahtay huey bi Kim nay mid-term exams ki tayyari karnay ka irada kar lia, aur apni 1 ankh say book ko parhnay ki koshish ki...
lekin ye kia ???????
books mai words ki jaga usay sirf aur sirf JILL dikhaee denay lagi...
wo sehma sehma washroom gaya , hath mu dhoya , phir aa kar book pakri , parhnay ki koshish ki , lekin usay to har jaga JILL hi dikhaee deti thi.....
aur isi tara raat guzar gaee aur wo kuchh bi parh na saka.... |
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Rizwan++
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Group: Members Joined: 15th Nov, 2007 Topic: 12 Post: 243 Age:
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| Posted on:11th Mar 2008, 7:48am |
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baba se mulaqat subah jab wo fajer ni namaz parne ja raha tha to use aik baba ji mile. jinhon ne us se khaha ke beta tum pareshan nahin ho. ager Allah ne chaha to tum apne exams main zaroor kamiyaab ho ge. baba ki baat sun kar use buhat honsla mila aur wo din raat exams ki tiyari karne laga. phir exams bhi khatam ho gai. aur jab result aya to us ne pore city main sab se ziyada no hasil kiye the. lekin us ki khoshi ziyada der tak qaim na reh saki jab use pata chala ke jill fail ho gai hai. |
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