Agar Aap Shair Hain!!

Ahmed Faraz nay kaheen kaha tha

SUNNA HAI OAS KO BHEE SHOKHAF HAI SHERO SHAHIRI SAY !!!

SO HUM BHEE MOJZAY APNAY HUNNAR K DAIKHTAY HAIN !!!

Tou iss thread mein aik famous poet kay kissi shahir kay kissi aik shair ka aik misra lain gay oar dosra misra mokammal aap nay apni shahiry say karain oar chahain tou oas par kohee gazal hee keh dain.

Oar agar kohee oas misray par fuuny misra bhee likhna chahay tou bhee likh sakta hai.

laikin kiss misrah per tabah aazmahee ki jahay yea bhee app hee batain gay.

jaisay :daikh Laila teray majnoo ka kaleja kia hai.....

sonaa hai...

sonaa hai kay intezaar maiN bhi luzzat hoti hai

chalo aaj hum bhi i ntezaar kar k dekhtay haiN lol

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sonaa hai jurm o sazaa kaa raastah  takhtay shaahi ko jataa hai

agar aisaa hai to chalo hum bhi jurm baRa kar kay dekhtay haiN

hee heee

PS: koi inn ash'aar wazan /bahar talaash karnay ki nakaam koshish nah karay... jab ikhlaaq say giray howaay ash'aar deewaan maiN shamil hosaktay haiN to auzaan say giray howay ash'aar kiyouN nahi lol

@ Love bird: galat sheir....

yar khuda k liay poetry ki tangen aor haath paon to na torein. Ahmad Faraz ki soul qabar mien bi tarap uthi ho gi. aap apni shairi to galt malt likh saktay hien lekin jo shairi dosary shairon ke ha usay khuda k liay sahi likhein. Jo sheir ap nay likha woh sahi is tarah ha:

Suna ha us ko bi hay sheiro shairi say shagaf

To ham bi moajzay apnay hunar k dekhtay hien

yes

ajab   haqeeqt   hey  jis  sy    mukr     b      nhi        saktey..

rukny ko shaid na kehy wo aur bnd gli hey guzr b nhi sktey

Dr Pandu

I am sorry.......Bohat pehlay yea sheir sunna tha ......durustagi ka shukeria