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kim84 |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 1:38am |
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 Request to RED CHILLI..
Ap ki ab tak tammam poetry ka my answer usi poetry ko convert kr k apko pesh kiya , Aap sy request hi sirf iss ik poetry ka answer khud bana kr post kry..
THanks..
tery hote hue mahafil men jalaate hain chiraag
log kyaa saadaa hain suuraj ko dikhaate hain chiraag
apanii maharuumiyonn pe sharmindaa hain
Khud nahiin rakhate to auron ke bujhaate hain chiraag
bastiyaan chaand sitaaron pe basaane vaale
kurraa-e-arz bujhaate jaate hain chiraag
kyaa Khabar hai un ko ke daaman bhii bhadak uThate hain
jo zamaane kii havaaon se bachaate hain chiraag
aisii taariikiiyaan aankhonn men basii hain 'Faraz'
raat to raat ham din ko jalaate hain chiraag
POET: AHMED FARAZ |
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Red Chilli |
Group: Members Joined: 20th Feb, 2008 Topic: 5 Post: 4968 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 4:54am |
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Kim84 is poetry ka answer main kya likhon gi ? mere pass kuch bachaa he nahi likhne ko
likhne ke liye mere pass kuch ho ga
to bhi likh nahi pauon gi. Sorry Kim
Bhari mehfil mein tanha mujhe rehna sikha diya
Tere pyar ne duniya ko jhoota kehna sikha diya
Kisi dard ya khushi ka ehsaas nahin hai ab to
Sab kucch zindagi mein chu_chaap sehna sikha diya
aab main aur kuch nahi likhon gi. is topic mein ye meri last post hai.
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kim84 |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 5:08am |
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Bharay Forum my tum ny hmy akela choor diya Bharay forum my tum ny hmy akela choor diya
Teri ik post ny hmara shairi sy dil joor diya..
kisi post k title ki trah akela hi ab mann..
Iss forum py mri trah bhut ny ana-jana choor diya...
Array ap tu khafa ho gai...my tu sirf ap k andar shair-o-shairi k zooq ko jagana chah rha tha....ap try tu karoo.....
Kher agr ap ko theek na laga hooo mra request to I AM SORRY....
But yee koi itni bari baat na thi k ap topic py post krna hi choor dy..
Rgds
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Red Chilli |
Group: Members Joined: 20th Feb, 2008 Topic: 5 Post: 4968 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 5:30am |
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 Kim84
aap ki baat mujhe buri nahi lagi.main khafa nahi hui hoon. mere ander shairo shairi ka zooq ............zara bhi nahi hai .isliye main ne kaha hai ke aab koi post nahi karoon gi. lekin baqee member yahan kuch na kuch zaroor post karen ge.
Bharay forum my tum ny hmy akela choor diya
bhare forum mein tum ko akela kaha chora hai?
Teri ik post ny hmara shairi sy dil joor diya..
teri ik post ne bikhri yaadon se dil jor diya
Iss forum py mri trah bhut ny ana-jana choor diya
na ker fiker iss forum pe meri tarah bahot aayen ge.
na ker zid tujhe kya pata
main to shehr ke haath pair toor deti hoon
is forum pe yehi mera kaam hai yehi mera naam hai (Red chilli)
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kim84 |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 5:57am |
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shairi ka rang.. Ap ki ye post ap ki shairi k zouq ka maun bolta saboot hi....
Zra ghoor kijyee ap bhi shairi sekh rhi hi.....dekha KIM k sath poetry ka tabadla krny ka faida....
Rgds |
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Red Chilli |
Group: Members Joined: 20th Feb, 2008 Topic: 5 Post: 4968 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 6:05am |
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 re :Kim84
is ka matlab aap ke saath poetry ka tabalah ker ke main shairi sikh jaoun gi
plz ye bhi bata deyn jab kisi mushayere mein main shair paron gi to.
tomatoes aur eggs , jhooton ka ziyda dard to nahi ho ga na.
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kim84 |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 6:30am |
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re KIM84 Dil sy poetry kro gi tu kbi tomatos & eggs nhi paray gy |
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safeena |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Jul, 2007 Topic: 15 Post: 240 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 7:09am |
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re urdu poetry buhat acchi poetry chal rahi hay yahan Kim kee tu kahir baat hee nirali hay red chilli aap bhi kam nahi shairi na annay per bhi acchi khasi shairi kee hay tu aanay per kia hoga .
wesay ye haath paon torr denay wali baat bari kharanaak hay wo bhi shairon k !! |
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Red Chilli |
Group: Members Joined: 20th Feb, 2008 Topic: 5 Post: 4968 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 7:56am |
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Kim
seekh jaoun gi main shairi
tu jo saath de ga mera
khaoun gi na kabi
anday, tomatoes., jhoote
tu jo saath de ga mera.
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BeautyStar |
Group: Members Joined: 16th May, 2007 Topic: 52 Post: 3598 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 8:02am |
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Shair-e-FORUM Kim Bahi app ne aatey hi apna rang dhang dekha surooh kardiyah... (lol)
Kim Bahi zara abb app iss ka bhi Jawab dey dein plz...!
"FARQ SIRF ITNA SA HAI"
Teri doli uthi,
Meri mayyat uthi.
Phool tujh par bhi paray,
Phool mujh par bhi paray..
Tu saj ke gai,
Mujhe sajaya gaya..
Tu uth ke gai,
Mujhe uthaya gaya..
Sahelian teri bhi thi,
Dost mere bhi thay..
Mehfil waha bhi thi,
Log yaha bhi thay..
Unka hansna waha,
Inka rona yaha..
Tera nikah parhaya gaya,
Mera janaza parhaya gaya..
Tujhe apnaya gaya,
Mujhe dafnaya gaya..
"FARQ SIRF ITNA SA HAI"
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sunehri76 |
Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 99 Post: 4655 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 8:08am |
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Beautystar mujhe bohat pasand ayi ye ghazal ... :) |
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Red Chilli |
Group: Members Joined: 20th Feb, 2008 Topic: 5 Post: 4968 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 8:20am |
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Ankhon Ko Intzaar Ka Deke Hunar Chahla Gaya ankhon ko intezaar ka deke huner chahla gaya
chaha tha ik shakhs ko jane kidhar chala gaya
din ki wo mehfilein gayii, raaton ke ratjage gaye
koi samet ker mere sham_O_saher chala gaya
jhonka hai ik bahaar ka range_E_kheyal_E_yaar bhi
her soo bikhar gayi khushboo jidher wo chala gaya
us ke he dam se dil mein aaj dhoop bhi chandni hai
deke wo apni yaad ke shams_O_qamar chala gaya
kuch_B_kuch, dar_O_dar kab se bhatak raha hai dil
humko bhula ke raah wo apni dagar chala gaya
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sunehri76 |
Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 99 Post: 4655 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 8:24am |
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hassne nahi deta Hassne nahi deta kabhi rone nahi deta
ye dil to koi kaam hone nahi deta,
tum mang rahe ho mere Dil se meri khawahish
bacha to kabhi apne khilone nahi deta
woh kaunn hai us se to mai waqif bhi nahi hoon
jo mujh ko kisi aur ka hone nahi deta |
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kim84 |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 8:50am |
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Re All: @ SAFEENA:
Bhi koi daad dy ya na dy sirf SAFEENA sister ka reply aa jaye tu mjhy lagta hi mri shairi ki keemat mil gai...pls isi trah reply krti rhy
@ RED CHILLI
seekh jao gi tum shairi sekh jao gii
My gr sath dun ya na dun tum jeet jaoo gii
Jo chaye byan kro lab-e-ikhtiyar sy..
Hr lafz k maini my sirf mjhy paoo gii ....seekh jao gii seekh jaoo gii
@ Beauty Star
Yar itni achi ghazal ka satya nash kr diya check my 3-4 months back posts uss my is ka original hi...ye to lagta hi kisi ny mri trah dublicate banaya hi..
@ SUNEHRI...
Jesy taraoon bina asman adhora hota hi..
Wesy SUNEHRI k reply k bina forum adhora hota hi...
Thanks for all.....keep smiling keep posting.....mjy to aisa mehsoos ho rha hi jesy kisi sharioon ki mehfil jama ho gayee hoo...
Rgds
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BeautyStar |
Group: Members Joined: 16th May, 2007 Topic: 52 Post: 3598 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 9:00am |
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Sunehri + Kim
Kim Bahi app hi woh link post kardein mujhey tou nahi mil raha hai :(
Sunehri Sister mujhey bhi yah ghazal buhat pasand hain... yah merey favourite ghazals ma se eak hai... aur abb tou Zubani yaad bhi ho gaey hai ;)
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BeautyStar |
Group: Members Joined: 16th May, 2007 Topic: 52 Post: 3598 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 9:11am |
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 Kim....
Mujhey iss ka bhi Jawab de doo...
Aana Meri Qabar Par Do Phool
Chadha Jana
Rona Na Aye Muskurake Chale Jana
Meri Qabr Pe Ek Baar Zaroor Ana
Magar Shart Hai Ansoo Na Bahana
Taklif Hogi Rooh Ko Bhi Ansoo Jo Aapke Nikleinge
Rooh Royegi Meri Rooh Ko Na Tadpaya Karna
Tere Khuwabon Mein Aya Karunga Zaroor
Kabhi Yaad Karke Meri Mohabat Ko Aazmaya Karna
Meri Qabar Pe Phool Na Chadhana Ansoovon Ke
Bas Aakar Qabar Pe Apni Mohabat Ka Saya Karna
Meri Dua Hai Tera Ghar Khushboo Se Bhara Rahe
Tum Khushi Ki Har Mehfil Mein Jaya Karna
Meri Yaad Mein Na Khona Kabhi Udaas Hokar
Apne Humsafar Ki Agosh Mein Sojaya Karna
Kabhi Rokar Mat Pukarna Mujhe
Main Wahan Se Wapis Nahi Aounga…!
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Red Chilli |
Group: Members Joined: 20th Feb, 2008 Topic: 5 Post: 4968 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 9:20am |
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Khuwab Aankhon Sey Ab Koi Chura Ker Ley Jaye
khuwab aankhon se koi chura ker ley jaye
Qaber ke sookhe hue phool utha ker ley jaye
Muntazir phool main khushbu ki tarah hoon kab se
koi jhonke ki tarah aaye ura ker ley jaye
yeh bhi pani hai mager aankh ka aisa pani
jo hatheli se rachi mehnidi chura ker ley jaye
main muhabbat se mahakta hua khat hum mujhe ko
Zindagi apni kitaabon mein chupa ker ley jaye
khaak insaaf hai nabeena butoon ke aage
raat thaali mein charaaghon ko sajaa ker ley jaye
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kim84 |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 9:25am |
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re Beauty Star: phool tujh per bhi hoon gay
phool mujh per bhi hoon gay
tujh per dulhan ka jora ho ga
mujh per kafan ki sajawat ho gi
khhobsurat tum bhi lag rahi ho gi
khoobsurat main bhi lag raha hoon ga
****** farq sirf itna ho ga******
tum kisi ki zindagi main ja rahi ho gi
main tumhari zindagi se ja raha hoon ga
mera naseeb tere kismat se acha ho ga
mera gham tere khsuhi se acha ho ga
yaqeen na aye tu apni ankhoon se dekhna
mera janaza tere barat se acha ho ga
mere samny rukhsat jo tere barat ho gi
is shaam gul sham-e-hiyat ho ga
wo bhi jaan kesi afat ki raat ho gi
pehlo main kisi k mere kainat ho gi
haaa my kehta hoo......MERA JANAZA TRI BARAT SY ACHA HO GA... |
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kim84 |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 113 Post: 786 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 9:39am |
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re Beauty Star: ANSWER Ana mri barat my naksh apny chor jana
nachna na aye tu gaa k hi chale jana
Mri barat my zaroor tu ana
Mgr shart k gheeroon ko na lana
tu mri taqdeer na ban saki tu kiya howa
mri hr tasveer ko tum jala dena
Gr satayee tjhy mri yadein is trah
du bond ansoon sy bojh halka kr lena
Mri dua hi k tjhy bhi mily ik hamsafar
krna hi agr intezar tu agly janam my mil lena
ishq k bazar my milti nhi muhbat ay KIM
aj dil khool k mri barat ki boli laga dena
POET : KIM |
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nelish |
Group: Members Joined: 13th Jan, 2008 Topic: 24 Post: 1151 Age:
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| Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 11:23pm |
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Kim Brother Good poetry
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