kim84 |
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Posted on:23rd Feb 2008, 11:29pm |
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Urdu Poetry: Kaun Kehta Hai Kai Mohobbat Ki Zaban Nahi Hoti
kaun kahataa hai mohabbat kii zubaan hotii hai ye haqiiqat to nigaahon se bayaan hotii hai vo na aaye to sataatii hai Khalish sii dil ko vo jo aaye to Khalish aur javaan hotii hai ruuh ko shaad kare dil ko jo pur-noor kare har nazaare men ye tanviir kahaan hotii hai zabt-e-sailaab-e-mohabbat ko kahaan tak roke dil menn jo baat ho aankhon se ayaan hotii hai zindagii ek sulagatii sii chitaa hai "Sahir" sholaa bantii hai na ye bhuj ke dhuaan hotii hai POET: SAHIR HOSHIARPURI
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~~HITMAN~~ |
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Posted on:23rd Feb 2008, 11:57pm |
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welcome welcome kim bhai kim bhai app ko doabara is forum par dekh kar acha laga..........meray khayaal main ab app ki party k loag bhi ahista ahista anay shuru ho hi jayeen gay yahan (jesa k safeena agayee)....
...........buhut hi barhiya poem hai (halankay samajh kuch nahi aya).........
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Red Chilli |
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Posted on:23rd Feb 2008, 12:16pm |
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agar ijazat ho to main bhi kuch kahu? Arz kya hai.KAUN KEHTA HI K MUHABBAT KI ZABAN NHI HOTImain to kehti hoon is ki aankhein , naak, daant, kaan, haath, zuban sab kuch hota hai. waah waah wah
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sunehri76 |
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Posted on:23rd Feb 2008, 4:37pm |
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kim
bohat achi poetry specially..
zindagii ek sulagatii sii chitaa hai "Sahir" sholaa bantii hai na ye bhuj ke dhuaan hotii hai |
safeena |
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Posted on:23rd Feb 2008, 9:29pm |
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Urdu poetry Assalam o Alikum
Kimy action main aagaya hay . bas ab lafz batanay kee der hay us lafz se pooree ghazal bannay main der nahi lagaya gee .
buhat acchi shairee likhi kim apni bhi koi likho .
Khoobsurat agar tum bhi mayri tarah silent member bani hoi ho tu aajao dubara forum pe kion k is section (shairee) main tumharee kami mehsos horahi hay
Hitman itnay samajhdaar ho tum tu janab tumharee samajh main kion nahi aya kuch ?
Sunehri kesi ho aap ? mujhay bhi ye wala shair buhat pasand aaya jo aap ne likha |
Red Chilli |
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Posted on:23rd Feb 2008, 11:01pm |
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zindagee se rooth jaaon gi main Dekhna aik roz zindagi se
rooth jaoon gi main
Chahe jitna bulaao ge wapas
na aaon gi main
Aasmaan ki banhoon mein
sama jaaon gi main
Dekhna yuonhee hanste
khailte yuonhee muskurate hooye
Kisi rooz chup chaap se
chali jaaon gi main
Na jane mujhe yaad kere gaa
bhi koi ke naheen
Na maloom kisi ko yaad
aaoon ke na yaad aaoon gi main
Shayad ke ho jaye mere liye
bhi koi aankh pur num
Shayad kisi ko ashkoon ka
tuhfa de jaaon gi main
Bahot tarpee hoon main sab ke
kareeb reh reh ke
Aab door jaa kay sab ko
tarpaaon gi main
Zara zara si baat peh yeh
rooth jaati hai mujh se
Dekhna kisi rooz zindagee
se rooth jaaon gi main
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josh |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 2:47am |
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nice urdu poetries.... nice poems...
kim ki poetry to ziada tar achi hi hoti hai par red chilli say itni achi poetry ki umeed nahi thi.. chili are u in love with someone ya bas aisy hi poetry achi lagi to post kar di ? |
kim84 |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 2:49am |
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Answer for RED CHILLI.. Ap ki poet ka jawab ap ki poetry hi k andaz my
Ik din wo meri ho jai gii
chahye jitna bhulaon usko pr yad wo aii gii Asman sy utar kr mri aghoosh my aii gii
Nikharty nikhaarty howy ik din Meri baahoon my semat jaye giii
Usy yaad koi ayee, ya naa yaad aye koi Mri muhabat zaroor yaad ay gii
Shayad k meri ankh my hi tera gham Uss gham ko tri yaad nuumm kr jaye gii
Bhut tarsaa hoon my try pyar k liyee Pass aa kr bhi chup ho ab aur kitna tarsaao gii
Tum by-wafa gr niklay ye mera nasseeb ho ga Teri yadein mjh sy bewafai na kr paye giii
Bus iss ummed py hi zindagi guzar jaye gi K ik din wo meri ho jaii giii
POET: KIM |
sunehri76 |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 7:37am |
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Kim&safeena;& Red Cilli @kim
apko to jawab nahi :)
Red chilli..ap aur poetry?waise red chilli kabhi nahi ruthegi..?samjhin?
safeena--mai bilkul thik hun,ap kaisi hain?aur plz ati rahyega forum pe---ap old members se to ahista ahista ronak phir se a rahi hai
karree hain Hijjar ke Lamhaat use keh dena bikhar rahi hai meri Zaat us se keh dena
Hawaen Mausam-e-ghum uske Shehar jayen to
mere Dukhon ki koi bat use keh dena,
ye Wehshatain si Udasi ye Rutjagon ke azaab
us ki hai ye inaayat use keh dena,
Bohat taveel Karbnaak hoti hai
judaiyon ki har ek Rat us se keh dena,
wo Dil ki bazi jahan mujhse jeetna chahe
main man longi wahin maat use keh dena,
waffa ki Raah me mai aaj bhi akaili hun
koi nahi hai mere sath use keh dena
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Red Chilli |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 7:49am |
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Mai eik larki hoon sab ko batana chahtee hoon Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahtee hoon
Mai khud ko
rakh ker kaheen bhool jana chahtee hoon
Mere naseeb ki
khushiyaan bhee kab mili mujh ko
Bas ab to umer
bher aansoo bahana chahtee hoon
Najane kitni
mohabbat hai ranj-o-ghum se mujhe
Koi bhee dard
ho dil mai chupana chahtee hoon
Baha baha ke
ye aasnoo beekhar chuki hoon bahut
Seemat ke zaat
mai ab muskurana chahtee hoon
Jise eik umer
dil mai chupa ke rakha hai
Wo raaz aaj
mai sab ko batana chahtee hoon
Wahee hai yaad
jo acha kaha hai logon ne
Baqi saare
seetam bhool jana chahtee hoon
Mujhe zamane
ne pathar samjh liya hai mager
Mai eik larki
hoon sab ko batana chahtee hoon
Jo mujh se
rooth chuki hain zamane ki khushiyaan
To mai bhee un
khushiyoon se rooth jana chahtee hoon
Koi to ho jo
lagaye mujhe seene se
Kisi ko mai
bhee apne ghum sunana chahtee hoon
Tu apne dil ke
her eik dar ko khool de
Main dard ban
ker tere dil mai aana chahtee hoon
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kim84 |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 8:19am |
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Answer to RED CHILLI.. Ajeeb larka hon tery hath sy mar jana chahta ho My try senay py sir rkh kr mar jana chahta ho
Mry naseeb ki khushiyan bhi mily tjhko Bas ab dharkan ban k try dil my bas jana chahta hoo
Tjhy kiya maloom kitni muhabat hi mjhy tumsy Agr to shama hi tu my ban-na parwarana chata ho
Na baha ansoon, hi ye kemati bhut k ban kr kangan teri kalai py khanka-nana chata hoo
Ye mera pyar hi jo mai ny dil my chupa rkha hi My wo raaz sb sy chupana chahta ho..
Tumhar he hi wajood mry zehan k goshoo my baki sb apnay paraye bhool jana chahta hoo..
Mjhy zamany ny pagal samjh liya hi magra.. My eik aashiq ho sb ko batana chahta hoo.
Jo mjh sy rooth gya hi mera PYAR tu.. Uss PYAR my majnoon ban jana chahta hoo
Koi tu ho jo mera shareeq-e-hamsafar ho.. Kisi ko my bhi apna ham-raaz banana chahta hoo
Tum apni her saans ko ab rook looo.. My saans ban kr tjhh my samana chata hoo.
Kesy ajeeb larka hoon tery hath sy mar jana chahta hoo...
POET: KIM |
josh |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 8:59am |
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attacks & counter attacks.... zabardast yar.
bohat achi poetries ka tabadla ho raha hai..
lagta hai kim ki tarah Red Chilli ki bi aik bohat ghamgeen dastaan hogi jo usnay abi tak hamsay share nahi ki... |
~~HITMAN~~ |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 9:11am |
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Welcome again Safeena.sis Main Khuaboon Ki Dunya Main Khona Nahi Chahta Lagti Hai Mujhe Khuaboon Ki Dunya Ye Shaeyri ******** shaeyeri say mujhe dilchaspi nahi , magar phir bhi shaeyri kar leta hoon jab dil ho akeela aur ghamgeen , do chaar ashaar main bhi likh leta hoon
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~~HITMAN~~ |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 9:12am |
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hmmmmmmm red chilli ab khul kar saamnay arahi hai ............ghoub jamay gi jab mil bathain gay chilli aur kim............good work ....lagay raho
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sunehri76 |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 11:24pm |
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Hitman jee wooow
achi shairy kar lete hain ap bhi..ap to chuppe rustam nikle.... |
Red Chilli |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 10:13pm |
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Main Tujhe Bhula Dungi
main dil per jabr karungi tujhe bhula dungi marungi khud bhi tujhe bhi kahri saza dungi ye teeregi mere ghar ka he kyun muqaddar ho main tere sheher ke sare diye bujha dungi hawa ka haath bataungi her tabahi mein her shajar se parindein main khud urra dungi wafa karungi kisi sogwaar chehre se purani qabr per qutba naya saja dungi isi kheyal mein guzri hai sham_e_dard aksar ke dard hadd se barega to muskura dungi tu asmaan ki surat hai gir parega kabhi zameen hoon main bhi magar tujhko asraa dungi barah rehi hai mere dukh nishaniya teri main tere khat teri tasweer tak jala dungi bahot din se mera dil udas hai is aayine ko koi aks ab naya dungi
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Red Chilli |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 10:30pm |
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Bara Kathin Hai Rasta Jo Aasako To Sath Do Bara Kathin Hai Rasta Jo Aasako
To Sath Do
Ye Zindagi Ka Faasla Mita Sako To Sath Do
Bare Faraib Khaoo Ge Bare Sitam
Uthaoo Ge
Ya Umer Bhur Ka Sath Hai Nibha Sakoo To Sath Do
Jo Tum Kaho To Ye Dil To Kia Main
Jaan Bhi Fida Karoon
Jo Main Kahoon Bus Ik Nazar Luta Sakoo To Sath Do
Hazaar Imtyhen , Hazaar
Aazmaishain
Hazar Dukh Hazar Ghum Utha Sakoo To Sath Doo
Ya Zindagi Yahan Khushi Ghamoon
Ke Sath Hai
Rula Sakoo To Sath Doo Hunsa Sakoo To Sath Do
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Red Chilli |
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Posted on:24th Feb 2008, 10:43pm |
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ye teen teen rango mein kyun ho gaya hai main ne to kuch nahi kya . is ko kya hua. yaha aik saath teen teen rang kaha se aa gaye hai. theek tarah samjh he nahi aa rehi
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kim84 |
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Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 12:38am |
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Geo Musharaf... ye teeregi mere ghar ka he kyun muqaddar ho main tere sheher ke sare diye bujha dungi
Loadshading ka gift kafi na tha k ap ny roshni k aur zariya bhi khatam kr diyee...
Rgds |
kim84 |
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Posted on:25th Feb 2008, 1:30am |
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RE ANSWER: TUM MJHY BHOLA NA PAOO GII.. Tum mjy bhola na paoo gii Mar k bhi tum meri ho jaoo gii Yee tevar ye naz o ada try.. Pr mery pyar k khanjar sy na bach paoo gii Hawa k sath chaly gi meri yadein try sang Hr sans k sath mjy mehsoos kr paoo gii wafa ka sabaq mjy kya sikhaaoi gi.. Tum be-wafa ho apny ap sy bhi wafa na kr paoo gii zindagi ki uljhanoo my katy shab-o-din try sedhay rastooon py bhi tum dag-magaoon gi..
tum agr musalman ho tu dafna diye jaoo giii.. tum agr hindu ho tu jala diyee jaoo giii... pr itna yaqeen apny ishq py hi mjy... dono suratoon my mjy bhola na paoo gii...
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