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khoobsurat |
Group: Members Joined: 06th Jul, 2007 Topic: 32 Post: 326 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 6:31am |
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 Urdu Poetry: Mohabbat Nahi Rahi
woh silsiley, woh shauq, woh nisbat nahi rahi, ab zindagi mai hijr ki wehshat nahi rahi. phir yun howa ke koi shanasa nahi raha, phir yun howa ke dard mai shiddat nahi rahi. phir yun howa ke ho gaya masroof woh bohot, aur ham ko yaad karne ki usse fursat nahi rahi. ab kiya kisi ko chahen ke ham ko to en dinon, khud apne aap se bhi mohabbat nahi rahi.
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anotherOne |
Group: Joined: 31st Dec, 1969 Topic: 10 Post: 205 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 7:18am |
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 kia karain....lachar bahot hain
sister adaaab arz hai,
shukarya,
wo waqt wo din wo rat nahi rahi
tujh main bhi to pehlay jaisi bat nahi rahi
phir yon hwa keh tu nay chatting shuroo kar di
noorclinic kay sawa tu kahin bhi online na rahi
rahti thi tu har waqt samnay
par phir teri ama nay tuj ko computer lay dia
phir yun hwa keh tu bi ho gayee masroof bahot
itnay internet card khareednay ki hamain himat na rahi
they bahot lachar teray bad hum
teray nayee andaz ko samjhany ki taqat na rahi
phir yun hwa keh Dr say eelaj karwa lia
aur humain bhi ither uthar ki fursat na rahi
kia kahain keh hum ko un dino say
muhabbat ki justajhooo nahi rahi
akhari dafa jab maar khai thi teeray bhaiyoon say
tab say teeray muhalay say bhi muhabat nahi rahi
adab arzhai, shukarya...................hahahhahahah :) |
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spain |
Group: Members Joined: 28th Oct, 2007 Topic: 0 Post: 1 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 10:05am |
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repley wo waqt wo din wo rat nahi rahi
tujh main bhi to pehlay jaisi bat nahi rahi
phir yon hwa keh tu nay chatting shuroo kar di
noorclinic kay sawa tu kahin bhi online na rahi
rahti thi tu har waqt samnay
par phir teri ama nay tuj ko computer lay dia
phir yun hwa keh tu bi ho gayee masroof bahot
itnay internet card khareednay ki hamain himat na rahi
they bahot lachar teray bad hum
teray nayee andaz ko samjhany ki taqat na rahi
phir yun hwa keh Dr say eelaj karwa lia
aur humain bhi ither uthar ki fursat na rahi
kia kahain keh hum ko un dino say
muhabbat ki justajhooo nahi rahi
akhari dafa jab maar khai thi teeray bhaiyoon say
tab say teeray muhalay say bhi muhabat nahi rahi
adab arzhai, shukarya...................hahahhahahah :) |
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sunny007 |
Group: Members Joined: 22nd Dec, 2007 Topic: 44 Post: 4214 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 10:30am |
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 my poetry
yar poetry main jis ka interst nahi ho wo kuch is tarah se likhte hain.
Ek sheer sunata hoon zara ghawar se suniee,
Muje nahi aata kisi aur se suniee.
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sunehri76 |
Group: Members Joined: 04th Aug, 2007 Topic: 99 Post: 4655 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 11:30pm |
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hehehe khubsurat ..very nice poetry
another one...
very funny ......mujhe to kim yad a gaya.......meri uske sath shairy gupshup chalti thi,aur wo isi trah mere shairs ko changing deta rehta tha answer me...
i hope he will back soon |
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~~HITMAN~~ |
Group: Members Joined: 09th May, 2011 Topic: 122 Post: 4287 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 12:07pm |
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Kuch samjh nahi aya magar good work khobsurat Kya karon Mujhe poetry samajh nahi aati mirza ghalib
kyun kay mujhe poetry main kabhi dilchaspi hi nahi rahi
wo khobsurat jo thoray gap k baad ayee hai is forum main
atay hi is forum main apni poetry ko likhay bina na rahi
atay hi khobsurat nay ki ek member ki shikayat
magar us ka naam batanay say gureez karti hi rahi
kya har pehley shair k akhir main rahi lagana zarori rahi
Agar nahi tou phir rahi laganay ki kya zarorat rahi (wah wah wah wah)
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~~HITMAN~~ |
Group: Members Joined: 09th May, 2011 Topic: 122 Post: 4287 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 12:11pm |
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Good work another one (tvOne) bhai buhut hi barhya ................magar ye tumnay likha hai ya spain nay ..........agar spain nay likha hai tou wohi kyun likha jo tum nay likha hai aur agar tumnay likha hai tou spain nay bhi wohi kyun likha.....................
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nikama |
Group: Members Joined: 15th Oct, 2007 Topic: 47 Post: 1808 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 1:56pm |
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 very good.
good from khub...& another...
I like nice poetry..koi faraz ka acha sa likho..
thanks
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Hangama |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Dec, 2007 Topic: 37 Post: 1261 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 2:34pm |
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Pagal Kisi ka chehray ne khushbu ko kardiya pagal
phir uska baad sama ka sama hogaya pagal
Jo unsai maina kaha zindagi banalo mujhai
To usna dherai sai aik lafz kahdiya Pagal |
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BeautyStar |
Group: Members Joined: 16th May, 2007 Topic: 52 Post: 3598 Age:
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| Posted on:13th Jan 2008, 3:42pm |
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Khalil-ullah-Farooqi Un ki poetry read karoo , Poetry k yah bhi usdaad hain ajj kal ..... I hope kah kuch members un ko jantey hoongee.....
DJ of Fm91..... show 12-4 on every Thursday
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anotherOne |
Group: Joined: 31st Dec, 1969 Topic: 10 Post: 205 Age:
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| Posted on:14th Jan 2008, 4:32pm |
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re. hittman:- yar is spain ka to mujh ko bhi nahi pata kaun hai, copy paste kar dia hai shaid us nay. kiyon bhai spain kahan ho?
beutystar:-Kia likhtay hain khalil sahib ab hum kahn say khalil sahib ko parain ap hi batao?
waisy mujhay andaza nahi tha keh noorclinic par meeray allawa itnay achay achay shair aur bhi majhoood hain....hahahahha |
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TITUS |
Group: Members Joined: 25th Apr, 2007 Topic: 5 Post: 24 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Jan 2008, 12:17am |
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my fav.it topic Middle East kay sehra mai titus na apnay ashiyanay talash ker
Jo hain tary naseeb kay bus danay talash ker |
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anotherOne |
Group: Joined: 31st Dec, 1969 Topic: 10 Post: 205 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Jan 2008, 3:01am |
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re-titus adab arz hai
aur pakanay say pehlay un danoon main say tinkay talash kar..........
shukarya |
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BeautyStar |
Group: Members Joined: 16th May, 2007 Topic: 52 Post: 3598 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Jan 2008, 2:02pm |
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Shair-e-NoorClinic hahaha abb sab loog buhat achi shairi karletey hain .... Mujhaey lagta hai buhat jald yahan per bhi Mushairey ka programm honey wala .... :D
AnotherOne : Khalil-ullah-Farooqi ki book app ko Pakistan ma mil sakhte hai kisi bhi ache BookShop per .... Aur in ka show atah hai FM91 on thursday 12am - 4am... samajh loo jo eak bar in ka show sun leta hai in ka Fan ban jatah hai ... buhat hi zabardast show hota hai aur Caller bhi buhat hi zabardast hoon ... Pakistan wapis aoo tou zaroor sunna yaar :)
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