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Give Suggestions About My Writing Style

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faisee Group: Active Members  Joined: 13th Feb, 2007  Topic: 79  Post: 776  Age:  30  
Posted on:23rd Jun 2007, 3:10am
 

Give Suggestions About My Writing Style

I have seen here answering style of many members. I liked most the writing styles of Dr sb, khan_80 and my reply (all aliases).

Please let me know if my style get too messy or too lengthy. Would you guys please like to give any tips or any critique so that it could get more effective. thanks
My Reply Group: Members  Joined: 19th Sep, 2010  Topic: 2  Post: 2048  Age:  45  
Posted on:23rd Jun 2007, 2:16pm
 

re: faisee

1. ap ka style bahut hi achcha hai ise change nahi karna. ham log bhi long aur detail mai reply dena chahte hai lekin majboori ki wajah se nahi de sakte.

2. majboori yeh hai keh hamari koshish hoti hai keh koi bhi member un-answered na rah jai. lehaza taqreeban sare member ko hi jawab dena par jata hai. aur agar ham tumhari tarah detail mai jawab de tu tamam member ko jawab nahi de sakte. isi lia hamara jawab mukhtasar hota hai.

3. waise is waqt karachi mai barish aur toofan ke bad bijli nahi hai. mai is waqt UPS ki bijli mai jawab de raha hoo. yeh computer ka ups hai warna light aur fan wala ups ka charge khatam ho chuka hai. beghair light aur beghair fan ke ap ko  reply kar raha hoo. sirf is lia keh ham sab ko ap ka reply pasand hai. aur ap ke isi style mai jawab chahte hai jis mai ap de rahe hai.
faisee Group: Active Members  Joined: 13th Feb, 2007  Topic: 79  Post: 776  Age:  30  
Posted on:23rd Jun 2007, 5:07pm
 

Re: My Reply

Thansk My Reply. Your prompt comments really boosted up my confidence.

I know you guys are too caring to reply each n every one. and for that reason you can not give that much time to a single member.

I know that in karachi its raining too heavily...and its your kind attitude that you logged in and replied my post. thanks alot I can understand the condition in which you guys reply after taking some time out of your daily schedule and your domestic life.

Now one thing which I really miss is your real identity, may be its hurting but whenever we see reply here, we have a personality in our mind which is replying. and I still have that personality which used to reply here earlier with other identity. correct me if I am wrong. I would really appreciate if you reply with a nice real identity, we would love that. Please dont mind its my personal opinion. thanks
Heart Group: Members  Joined: 15th Mar, 2007  Topic: 13  Post: 83  Age:   
Posted on:23rd Jun 2007, 8:19pm
 

Mera bhi???

Please also tell me about my answering style too. Should I change???
My Reply Group: Members  Joined: 19th Sep, 2010  Topic: 2  Post: 2048  Age:  45  
Posted on:24th Jun 2007, 7:06am
 

re: Heart

1. Tumhara style bhi apni jagah bahut achcha hai. ise continue rakho. jawab dene ke kuch tips note karlo

2. jawab is tarah likhna chahia keh forum ka har member asani se read kar le aur achchi tarah samajh le keh kia likha hai.

3. ham agar bahut ziadah mushkil alfaz istemal kare ya medical ki terminology istemal kare tu hamare bahut sare member ke samajh mai jawab nahi aye ga. is lia hamai chahia keh asan se asan lafzon mai koi mushkil terminology ko istemal kia beghair jawab de.

4. jawab dete waqt hamesha yad rakhe keh ham yaha par apni qabliat ka izhar nahi kar rahe balke logo ke problem solve kar rahe hai. jab ap aisa soche ge tu phir ap ka style khood bakhood user friendly ho jai ga.

5. jawab likhne ke bad apne jawab ko doosre ki nigah se dekhe aur soche ke kia mera jawab asani se read kia jaraha hai. kia mera jawab asani se samjha ja sakta hai. agar aisa nahi hai tu phir ose edit kare takeh asani se read kia ja sake aur asani se samjha ja sake.

5. yaha par log hamari degree aur qabliat se mutasir hone nahi ate balke apne masail ka hal dhoondne ate hai. lehaza ap ke jawab ketna hi alimana aur achcha ho logo ko tab hi pasand aye ga jab wo ose asani se read kar le aur asani se samajh le.

6. agar hamara jawab read karne mai mushkil horaha ho tu log hamari post ko read kia beghair age move kar jai ge. aur agar read ke bawajood bhi samajh nahi aya to phir bore ho jai ge. dono soorato mai woh hamare ainda kisi post ko read kia beghair aage move kar jai ge. jab log hamara jawab read kia beghair aage move kar jai tu phir aise jawab ka kia faida.
justSalman Group: Members  Joined: 16th Apr, 2007  Topic: 7  Post: 174  Age:  29  
Posted on:24th Jun 2007, 8:00am
 

No its Ok

your style is nice Bro Faisee Just keep replying.

every reply depends on topic how discussion of topic is needed all members are replying very nice.

Thanks...........

khan_80 Group: Members  Joined: 09th Mar, 2007  Topic: 8  Post: 2604  Age:  33  
Posted on:26th Jun 2007, 3:02pm
 

thanx for ur comments. ur ways of expressing is very very nice and i also like ur thinkings. when u come up with a lengthy reply, it is always informative and worth reading so, carry on with ur style. its amazing.
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