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faisee |
Group: Active Members Joined: 13th Feb, 2007 Topic: 79 Post: 776 Age:
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| Posted on:14th Aug 2007, 5:32pm |
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 Meri Pasand: Bat Nikle Ge To Dur Tak Jai Gi
sisters: aik nazm meri nazar sai guzri, achi lagi tu aap kai israr per yhan paste karta hoon. sana, khoobsoorat, aur baqi tamam larkion kai comments ka intezar rahay ga :) .
baat niklay gi to phir
dur talak jai gi
log bay-wajha udaasi
ka sabab poochain gay
yeh bhi poochain gay
kay tum itni paraishain kyoon ho
unglian oothain gi
sookhay howay baloon ki taraf
ek nazar dekhain gi
guzray howay saloon ki taraf
choorioon par bhi kai
tanz kiyay jain gay
kamptay hatoon par bhi
fiqray kasay jain gay
log zalim hain
har ek baat ka ta'ana dain gay
batoon batoon main
mera ziqar bhi lay aain gay
unki batoon zara sa bhi
asar mat laina
warna chehray kay
ta'asur say samagh jain gay
chahay kuch bhi ho
sawalat na karna unsay
mairay baray main
koi baat na karna unsay
baat niklay gi to phir
dur talak jai gi
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Group: Members Joined: 07th Aug, 2007 Topic: 0 Post: 35 Age:
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| Posted on:14th Aug 2007, 6:11pm |
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lag rah he aap ne b4 marriege sex ker kay pregnant ker dia hay kisi ko or ab mana kar rahe hain us ko kay kisi kay samne mayra naam na lena sookhay baal aur kanpte haath kia hal ker dia becharee ka aao aa kay nikah karo koi kuch nahi kahay ga phir |
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faisee |
Group: Active Members Joined: 13th Feb, 2007 Topic: 79 Post: 776 Age:
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| Posted on:14th Aug 2007, 6:24pm |
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Re: !!!!! bhai is main aap ka koi qusoor nahin. I would just say "no comments"
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!!!!!!!! |
Group: Members Joined: 07th Aug, 2007 Topic: 0 Post: 35 Age:
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| Posted on:14th Aug 2007, 6:29pm |
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muhay pata hai aap jitna naik tu is forum main koi aur hai nahi even koi girl bhi kion kay girls aap ko uksaati hain mazaq kay liye jia poet ne ye likhi hai us kay liye likhay hai comments |
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Bewaqoof |
Group: Members Joined: 19th Sep, 2010 Topic: 251 Post: 4290 Age:
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| Posted on:14th Aug 2007, 10:04pm |
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faisee abhi mere party mai hai !!!!!!: dekhe janab ap faisee ki nazam par comments nahi de. kio keh onho ne pahle hi kah dia hai keh yeh sana, khoobsoorat aur doosri larkio ke nam hai. waise doosrei larkio mai safeena (dar se nam nahi lia hai) bhi shamil hai.
mai samajhta tha keh sirf larke hi larkio ko cherte hai. lekin pata chala keh larkia bhi larke ko cherti hai. aaj inhi larkio ki cher char se faisee sahib shairi karne lage. waise mai ne pahle hi kaha tha keh faisee woh nahi hai jo keh yeh khawateen samajh rahi hai.
faisee kia hai? yeh mai nahi bataoo ga. kio ke faisee abhi meri party mai hai. agar kabhi aap ki tarah mere opposition party mai gia tu phir batao ga.
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faisee |
Group: Active Members Joined: 13th Feb, 2007 Topic: 79 Post: 776 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 1:49am |
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Re: Bewaqoof hahaha
- kia Bewaqoof nai faisee ko beniqab kar dia?
- kia bewaqoof ki faisee kai baray main inkishafat durust thay?
- kia bewaqoof un baton ko sabit karnay main kamyab raha?
- kia bewaqoof kai comments moderators nai edit kar diye??
- kia faisee bewaqoof ki party sai nikal gaya ya nahin?
- kia faisee kabhi shadi karay ga? aur karay ga tu kitni?
- kia faisee aik haqeeqat hai ya afsana?
- har larki faisee ki behan banna kion pasand kartee hai, bewaqoof kai aiterazat
- faisee kai khufia muaashqon ki hosh ruba kahanaian
- kia bewaqoof faisee ka asal roop dikhanay main kamyab raha?
- kia faisee nai bhi bewaqoof ko forum sai janay ki dhamki di?
faisee aur bewaqoof ki debates ki tafseelat, faisee ki rangeenion ki dilkash kahanian, sansani khaiz inkishafat kai saath...aglay shumaray main mulahiza farmaye.
apni copy aaj hi book karwa lain. jaldi kijye kahin aisa na ho der ho jaye.
yeh dastan tamam khawateen digests main qist-war shaya ho gi. khareedna mat bhoolain.
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josh |
Group: Members Joined: 30th Jul, 2007 Topic: 47 Post: 2296 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 4:25am |
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faisee kia hai? faiseee muje apki poetry say ziada apkay aglay shumaray k baray mai parh kar ziada khushi hui. very nice, good sense of humour.
afsos faisee, apko larkion k comments ka intezar tha or yahan larko ka attack ho chuka hai,, lekin muje umeed hai kuchh reham dil larkian apnay achay achay comments zaroor daingi especially sana.
waisey ye normal hai, agar koi larki kisi larkay say baat karay to dekhnay walay larko ko bohat gussa ata hai.
to mera ye suggestion hai k ainda larkio say mashwara or comments ka zikar na kaRna, waRna dunia bohat zalim hai, u know better.
log zalim hain
har ek baat ka ta'ana dain gay
according to bewakoof "faisee kia hai" ??
baat niklay gi to phir
dur talak jai gi |
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Ugly-Sana |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 7 Post: 539 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 9:35am |
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 To Faisee Bhai:
Assalam-u-alaikum:
App ne mera naam mention kiya reply karney waloon mein, mujhey achha laga jiss tarah app itnee izzat kartey hein.
I really liked the poetry you've posted here. It was like a soothing conversation between loved ones for not revealing the truth about their love. Mujhey buhat achhi lagi hai, aur yeh sun kar bhi achha laga hai ke app ko bhi poetry achhi lagti hai.
Baat koi ho na ho, baat kahin durr tak nikley ya na nikley, Lekin (!!!!!!!) jaisey loog bhi hain na jo baat ke nikalney se pehley hi ussey durr talak le jatey hein. Aur haan (!!!!!!!!) ki samajhdari se hi lagta hai ke woh poetry ko kitna samjhien gey aur kaisey uss ki tashreeh karen gey. Mera khayal hai ke woh un cheezoon ke agey sochtey hi nahi hain.
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Ugly-Sana |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 7 Post: 539 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 9:49am |
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To Josh and Bewaqoof Josh: Waisey agar Faisee bhai ne poetry post ki hai aur especially larkiyoon se request ki hai reply karney ki to larkoon ko itna dukh kyon ho raha hai ke phir bhi apney khayalaat aur ideas yahan post kar rahey hain, Aur sach hi hai ke jub koi larki kissi larkey ki tareef karti hai to dusrey larkoon ko attack to a hi jata hai. AUr app ki information ke liye, yahan koi reham kar ke postings nahi kar raha, i would love to read more of Faisee postings here and would love to reply to them as well. He is really the kind of person, who knows how to respect others, especially women. I love that about him.
Bewaqoof: Kabhie to app Faisee bhai ki mahalfat kartey hein, kabhie un ki postings par hafgi kartey hein, aur jaisey ke Faisee bhai ne kaha ke agar woh forum par kuchh din na ayein to app unhien miss bhi kartey hein. Overall, app chahtey kya hain? I mean what you think about Faisee? Like you have declared that you know what Faisee is? You sound funny most of the times, and smart only sometimes. |
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safeena |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Jul, 2007 Topic: 15 Post: 240 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 9:57am |
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Re : Faisee Aaalam o Alikum
bewaqoof kehte hain k faisee ne dar k mayra naam nahi likha Faisee aap ye batao k kiya main darane wali cheez lagte hoon :)
wese kafi sad poetry hai acchi lagi aur buhat hassas see |
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faisee |
Group: Active Members Joined: 13th Feb, 2007 Topic: 79 Post: 776 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 3:53pm |
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Re: josh josh:I am happy something made u smiling. and I dint mean that only girls should reply, it was just a light gesture. did u notice that smiley. I always appreciate the comments from everyone even those by !!!!! becoz atleast he took some time out and put some words.
I like your sentence that "doosray larkon ko gussa ata hai", it made me laughing, but no worry guys, these all are just my sisters. aur we dont know who will be here on this forum tomorrow, this forum family is just a mirage in essence, so just serve for the humanity, atleast making someone happy.
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faisee |
Group: Active Members Joined: 13th Feb, 2007 Topic: 79 Post: 776 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 4:01pm |
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Re: cute_sana Wa alaikum salam sister
As sana means "tareef", tu "tareef" and appreciation kabhi ugly nahin ho saktee, so you can't be. atleast for whome jis ki sana ki jaye.
baqi I am happy that you liked it, and admired it. yeah many of them posted nice poems, it looked different and touched my heart. so i shared here. aur dont give so much love here as when you will leave from here like cherry, we will miss u alot.
baqi aap logon nai itnay achay reply kiye kai I am forced to give detailed replies here. :) and dont worry about bewaqoof. and waqai bewaqoof give different remarks on different places. lets see what he knows?
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faisee |
Group: Active Members Joined: 13th Feb, 2007 Topic: 79 Post: 776 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 4:04pm |
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Re: safeena
Wa alaikum salam sister
hahah. aap tu daranay wali bilkul bhi nahin hain, laikin bewaqoof ka naam sun kar mujhay bhoot yaad a jata hai ab :)
you are such a nice, humble and caring sister. woh tu bas jaldi main ziada name mention nahin kiye main nai. and it was just an expression of joke.
thanks for liking it. and dont expect more in near future :)
ohhhhhh....aaj kai reply ka quota khatam hua..thak gaya main :)
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safeena |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Jul, 2007 Topic: 15 Post: 240 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 4:12pm |
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Re : Faisee thanx for urs reply for me
bewaqoof ko tu ab main samajh gai hoon main ne wese hee just joking poocha thaa k kia waqai ye baat hay kion k bewaqoof ko tu mayray naam pe paseenay bhi aarahay hain na :) Zodiac signs per mayri post unhone read nahi kee shayad
tired tu hona hay itni sisters k pasandeeda bhai jo ban gaye ho aap aur ye theek likha choutay bhai hee ho hum sab tu jesa k kaha hay kisi ne AMMAIN hain ab choutay bhai ka ye farz tu banta hay na k her sister k sawal per reply zaror karay
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Ugly-Sana |
Group: Members Joined: 02nd Aug, 2007 Topic: 7 Post: 539 Age:
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 4:40pm |
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To Faisee: You gave nice meaning to my name. It meant to be admiration, but it sounded even better as Cute_Sana. Thanks for such a lovely name. |
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